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Re: CORNCAKE
Thank you Bill I will think that over
posted by
C_C_T
on July 4, 2010 at 7:02 AM
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I think one day we will all be at rest! Awesome imagery and a poignant opening! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 4, 2010 at 6:24 AM
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CORNCAKE
Z You show a sense if poetry in your expression of the senses sir! BC=-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on July 4, 2010 at 5:34 AM
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Re: I truly believe that those we love and have now gone are always close by.
Hello Kabu you have to do what I do just use one at a time, it helps one to see more clearly. Of course you can buy them in a bottle, handy for special occasions.' Don't go into the woods today Grrr.' might not be friendly like some Bears. Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 11:42 PM
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Hi S.F. Yes it never really goes away and sometimes it's better that way
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 11:35 PM
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Re: Shobana
Hello Shobana it was funny, very often my sister-in-law reads the first line of my poem because it is free. Meany, But when I posted and the first line sprawled across the page I had to delete it sharply and substitute a heading. It is like one doesn't mind looking at a nude if one is painting the subject, but would be horrified if the same one stood in the high street. Hope Dad is keeping better. Thank you.
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posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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Re: Simone
Thank you Simone always nice to hear from you
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
Thank you Wiley, I feel I can go on a bit longer
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 11:07 PM
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Thank you F.S. You have your own dreams to look forward to, be lucky.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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Thank you Taps that was really nice
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 11:04 PM
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Re: C.C
Thank you abaneriee one can only try
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 11:02 PM
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Re: so well said..
Lo Sue Thank you for calling
posted by
C_C_T
on July 3, 2010 at 10:55 PM
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so well said..
posted by
Star5_
on July 3, 2010 at 9:27 PM
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C.C
It is beautiful cadence and I like the flow of your synchronized thoughts. Thanks also for your thoughtful coments on my blog.
posted by
anib
on July 3, 2010 at 8:53 PM
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Well done! This is one that sounds perfect whe read out loud.
I like putting poems to that test, and you pass with flying colors.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 3, 2010 at 6:05 PM
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I do believe that you will be where you want to be with that special someone.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 3, 2010 at 5:23 PM
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CORNCRAKE
A lovely poem and I do pray one day you will feel at rest
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 3, 2010 at 5:08 PM
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Excellent work! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 3, 2010 at 4:18 PM
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What a gorgeous poem CC. Just beautiful.
posted by
shobana
on July 3, 2010 at 4:02 PM
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I know this
posted by
spiderfly
on July 3, 2010 at 1:27 PM
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I truly believe that those we love and have now gone are always close by.
Or at least they are closeby while we need them. S omany strange things....I loved this poem even though it made me wish I still knew how to cry.
posted by
Kabu
on July 3, 2010 at 11:26 AM
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