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Pat-B
Heavy, heavy stuff, Pat.  I would have been sitting at that table with my mouth wide open and wondering why I was there among the talented ones.

posted by johnmacnab on July 5, 2010 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

Those kinds of fragments make a book well worth the reading.

posted by TAPS. on July 1, 2010 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

this is a wonderful extract....you really are an expert.

posted by Kabu on July 1, 2010 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

love your flow of writing

posted by NIGHTWRITE on July 1, 2010 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

Deep stuff, Pat-B. One can identify with the characters' feeling of isolation. It would be interesting to continue reading - to see if they will ever discover that each has to make his own happiness - as the French say "être bien dans sa peau", be confident, or well,  inside our own skin. Depending on others for our serenity is a mistake.

posted by adnohr on July 1, 2010 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply