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I so much wanted to see you DO SOMETHING to keep the house.
I really felt sorry for the house. love and joy, Kay 
posted by
KayJoy
on October 19, 2010 at 10:25 PM
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i like the repetition
posted by
ain_natasha
on June 17, 2010 at 6:54 PM
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When I was slowly watching my house
Lovely imagery. It's so heart rending to see your house falling apart and not having money to repair it.
posted by
2Philomena
on June 7, 2010 at 10:11 AM
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Strangely touching
I feel so sorry for the house now
posted by
lionreign
on June 7, 2010 at 8:51 AM
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What a poignant illustration! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 6, 2010 at 10:10 PM
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It is quite painful to see the house that you love decaying and you have aptly called it a nobody's child. Very nice poem straightforward.
posted by
shobana
on June 6, 2010 at 12:29 AM
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Very tough it is to continually maintain a house. The process never stops.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 5, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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House
I suppose one likes a house or wishes to leave it and let someone else have the problem.
I always think that I would like a new house and not have to worry about repairs or decoration for a few years. Although it is nice to know if the neighbors will be friendly,
or even too friendly. A nice poem refreshingly clear.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 5, 2010 at 12:36 AM
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