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Darson
You recount your every single experience with such finesse; it's no wonder you're gifted. That 'allowance' thing that your dad had because he earned a paycheck and your mom didn't, and being from a refugee background would cook in that frugal way, to the sufferings of you children, was indeed touching. Marvelous! Kudos!!

posted by anib on May 22, 2010 at 11:31 PM | link to this | reply

I have known a few of those characters... Great story!  Well written and engaging.  Excellent work! xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on May 20, 2010 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

I am not too keen on the Geralds in this world.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 18, 2010 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
I inwardly called the people that flocked around him the 'silly' people. They were the ones that were so easily fooled. It had more to do with them than it did with him...they were needy people...and narcissists attract that, with their supposed charm and 'plastic' remedies to the needy people's loneliness. They are easy prey, the low-lying fruit. Charlene wasn't fooled at all. Neither were her parents, who, I'm sure, were warning her about my father.

posted by Darson on May 17, 2010 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos
He worked in a hospital, where he charmed the patients...or used them as further captive audience. Some people adored him and sung his praises, others could not stand the man. It was all a matter of perspective. His co-workers didn't like him and he was eventually fired from every job I've ever known him to have...due to the interpersonal complications that inevitably occurred.

posted by Darson on May 17, 2010 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

unless he kept up his own love of himself....
a little man like he is would have nothing......real people must loathe him.

posted by Kabu on May 17, 2010 at 8:02 PM | link to this | reply

Darson
What did Gerald do for a living, or was he just a 'man about town'?

posted by Nautikos on May 17, 2010 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Date
...Even that may be pushing it, Corncrake! Ewwww.

posted by Darson on May 17, 2010 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

Date
Perhaps Gerald should have realized he was only attractive to someone his own age, if they were a bit desperate.

posted by C_C_T on May 17, 2010 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply