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CORNCRAKE
The love dance between He and She I calls it, well done.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 13, 2010 at 10:11 AM
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CORNCAKE
c Love conquers time sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on May 12, 2010 at 11:59 PM
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Re: we are ....very nicely written....sometimes wedo take our Nano second here
You are a way ahead of me Kabu, I have to feel my way very discretely. One has to cover one'self against all possibilties. I mean it's not up to me, I only tell it as it happens Hm.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 12, 2010 at 11:58 PM
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Re: Sam
I hope you are not over estimating my ability Sam I probably would not be writing at all, but I felt a bit of a sham just posting former writing. It will be interesting to read your new form, but I guess that will be evening.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 12, 2010 at 11:49 PM
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Re: Shobana
I'm sure you will find it Shobana and I hope it is not too far away. I don't mean in time.
Well you have more or less given me permission to carry on with She, please do not blame me.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 12, 2010 at 11:40 PM
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It's midnight where I am at! But I have the worst hours! I keep a blanket in my den handy because I fall asleep at the computer, too! I am beginning a new medication regime now so I have not idea how it will come together! One is a sleep aid combo migraine med! We'll see! Good morning to you, too! I am now fussing with a new form of poetry, but I think it is better suited to your style, I mean along the thought processes. Well I will post it in the morning of my morning, lol, and perhaps you may want to try it. It is a combination of prose poetry and Haiku, but it can have a quirky humor than can be applied and with the way you weave imagery now it could be blast for you. sam
posted by
sam444
on May 12, 2010 at 10:54 PM
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These were both fantastic and I adore the dialogue between the two! So real! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 12, 2010 at 8:25 PM
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we are ....very nicely written....sometimes wedo take our Nano second here
too seriously....or waste it.
The second...I like the way he thinks od pulling the blinds...what do they say about allbeing the same in the dark!
posted by
Kabu
on May 12, 2010 at 5:50 PM
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Hi CC, We are is just beautiful..it would be beautiful to find the glow. Loved both the poems. Thanks for the visit and it is all imagery CC.
posted by
shobana
on May 12, 2010 at 3:21 PM
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