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The fragilty og love, consummated or not and the anxiety, evokes tenderness. Well done, Straightforward.
posted by
anib
on May 16, 2010 at 10:28 PM
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Straightforward your poem so tenderly expresses the wanting.. the having.. the vulnerability of love.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 12, 2010 at 4:36 PM
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wow I got a lump in my throat while reading this.
very touching
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on May 12, 2010 at 7:14 AM
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well done
posted by
janey_
on May 10, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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I like the way that you used "u" and "n." That made it more personal to me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 10, 2010 at 5:07 PM
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Fantastic closing stanza! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on May 10, 2010 at 4:13 PM
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I feel that there is not much else to say after that. A sit and ahh type of feeling. Very soulfully direct.
posted by
PinkWeaver
on May 10, 2010 at 12:31 PM
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My Love
If you could can do what your poem suggests straightforward someone is looking forward to Heaven.
It is nice poetry a nice clarity of expression.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 10, 2010 at 3:48 AM
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Very nice Straightforward, the last few lines touching. Thanks for the visit and comment.
posted by
shobana
on May 10, 2010 at 1:20 AM
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