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Of Wonderful Discovery: It’s wildly fun and creative – this trip to another ‘galaxy’ and shares the metabolism of a ‘bee’ actually – I liked the energy in this write ~ so fun then of Stressful Thoughts, CC of all that could go wrong and I see (while reading) the last scene that of ‘the Graduate” humming Mrs. Robinson now -
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posted by
elysianfields
on April 29, 2010 at 10:10 AM
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I thought the ending in the first was rather provocative! But I liked it! And you humor was a joy to read, the way you cleverly place the twists and the unexpected! sam
I loved your comment, I doubt anyone would have read had they known they were going to get about two thirds of a novel. The greenhouse I want is a mere 8' by 10'! I had one when the kids were younger and I just want one to fuss around in and grow the things for my yard/ I want redwood that is why I am collecting now. I will order the glass or whatever I decide when I move.
posted by
sam444
on April 29, 2010 at 8:32 AM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Shobana, I am writing down all your advice. Sadly as well all the unanswered flower questions. No need to worry though I would probably get them jumbled up.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 29, 2010 at 4:12 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Are your comments copywrite Billl?
posted by
C_C_T
on April 29, 2010 at 4:05 AM
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Re: Simone
Most comedians are miserable Simone.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 29, 2010 at 4:03 AM
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Re: Should have taken a taxi...shoulda coulda woulda didn't
You are not a councillor by any chance are you Kabu?
posted by
C_C_T
on April 29, 2010 at 4:02 AM
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CC - see that is the thing..don't wait for the bus, you should have taken the taxi. Very humorous - both the poems.
posted by
shobana
on April 29, 2010 at 12:32 AM
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CORNCAKE
{ I guess that urgency utters poetry sir. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 28, 2010 at 10:01 PM
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I think they are both great... You have a way to interject humor and emotions into your writing that that is unique to you. ... You are talented my friend xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 28, 2010 at 6:22 PM
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Should have taken a taxi...shoulda coulda woulda didn't
This is how I see so much of your work........just musing on life and all the maybe's and if only's
posted by
Kabu
on April 28, 2010 at 5:19 PM
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