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I so like this style.
posted by
Straightforward
on April 24, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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Re: Re:
Yes, I am on a bike while blogging ~` my penny farthing! lol And I did not get the marigolds planted because there is still snow on the mountain tops! And the rule in the valley is to wait until the snow has melted! But I got the areas ready for sowing! I love it that you are funny! Now, have a bit o; tea on me! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 23, 2010 at 11:45 PM
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I can't help always imaging you riding up on your bike to view a blog. I hope you wear a crash helmet. Sorry Sam it is a job to be witty at 7-30 am with the hoovering to do and just a touch of ground frost. Did you ever plant those marigold seeds that you gathered? Remember if you did slugs and snails think they are roast beef
Many thanks.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2010 at 11:36 PM
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Hi E.E. thank you I need not worry that you would mind abstract. Good news on the jar front, I have found something that wants slightly modifying C.C.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2010 at 11:27 PM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
Wiley please put an arm around the Misses and explain things to her. Thank you for your kind comments, hope it is not too painful, it wears one down, buy her a nice flower
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2010 at 11:23 PM
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Re: I love the dialogue. so flirty but will she ever walk that path for him?
I love honest people Kabu. How could she not, I already know what happens, lovely Now your second, have you read, this was copying his style,it is OK he gave his permission, well I thought that he had, but I was knocking it back, well moderately after a long stressful experience . Don't read too deeply into to it you might be shocked
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2010 at 11:18 PM
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Re: Simone
Well as you know too well Simone this really happens
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Re: CORNCAKE
You like pretty things Bill, don't ever lose it
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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Re: CORNCRAKE, I REALLY LIKED 'UNMADE'
DSm Yes Sir you are probably right and an anomaly. sometimes also clipped as not proper for a genteel view. You see dsm one has to write that which is currently fashionable and you know what that means.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2010 at 11:04 PM
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CORNCAKE
Z I can picture these situations. The poems are not pretty but they’re sure good sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 23, 2010 at 9:26 PM
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Loved this one... Excellent CC An angel flirting is such a cute concept... Great work! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 23, 2010 at 9:01 PM
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I love the dialogue. so flirty but will she ever walk that path for him?
I am an honest person. I liked the rhythm of unmade but woe is Kabu...I don't understand it.
posted by
Kabu
on April 23, 2010 at 7:41 PM
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CORNCRAKE, I REALLY LIKED 'UNMADE'
It seems to be like a photographic "negative" of a relationship, naming reality with the opposite traits. Kind of vague, abstract for sure, but totally not stream of conscious. It seemed intentional, and so it is an analogy right? Of...how it fels to be disappointed, lost, confused, betrayed, or loved? IDK, maybe not.
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 23, 2010 at 7:33 PM
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CORNCRAKE
Let's face it, that angel has the 'hots' and the poetry is happily entertaining and very creative.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 23, 2010 at 6:08 PM
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So we begin where the bottom was smacked ~ the dialogue is entertaining for sure. I like your poetry of: 'petals so sun-kissed' and the analogy after ~
and Unmade: I have to tell you CC - I love that line: 'these sheets of paper can be wrapped around odd feelings' - this reminds me of a decoupage or scrapbook page actually ~ and the end just made me sigh - E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on April 23, 2010 at 4:26 PM
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Magnificent poetry and interaction! I always enjoy myself at your blogs! Continually wondering what you have created! I tip my poetic hat to you, too! BTW, Kristie deserved it even though it was naughty! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on April 23, 2010 at 1:39 PM
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