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Re: How tenuous and exploratory...
I suppose it is down to choice Pat  Thank you

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 7:40 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Astounding in breadth and depth, Corncrake!
Thanks Raye, hope you feel better

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

How tenuous and exploratory...
I can't count the times I've tiptoed between certainty and doubt. Nicely spun! Write on!

posted by Pat_B on April 22, 2010 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

Astounding in breadth and depth, Corncrake!
You continually amaze..

posted by Katray2 on April 22, 2010 at 6:05 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Stolen MB
Hi Fema I am really quite ordinary. I will try and feel romantic for your sake, yes I feel different already Thank you for your kind comments                             

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 6:00 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CC - writes of, to me:
I suppose it is better to resist a lot of things E.E. It just gets easier as one gets older.

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re:
Thank you Simone, I guess we all have our struggles

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 5:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CORNCAKE
I shouldn't mention things like that Bill, It might be believed

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 5:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam
I am glad to hear help is on the way Sam, I was wondering which way to turn I always wish I had taken the other route  

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 5:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: it is amazing that you were able to put words to the inner struggle
Tzippy pleased you found it interesting, It usually happens in slow motion.  

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Shobana
I find people have not got good memories, you did say that I could visit your magic garden or was that a different Shobana ?   

posted by C_C_T on April 22, 2010 at 5:28 AM | link to this | reply

I wish I could help you with all that conflicting emotions CC..Loved the first poem..just beautiful.

posted by shobana on April 21, 2010 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply

it is amazing that you were able to put words to the inner struggle
that we all must endure. and you did it so beautifully that I actually felt like i was swaying back and forth being reasonable and reckless.

posted by Tzippy on April 21, 2010 at 5:05 PM | link to this | reply

I loved the close for the first poem, so exquisite for me! And for the second one here And yes help is on its way! lol sam

posted by sam444 on April 21, 2010 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

CORNCAKE

x What a tender web that you weave sir. Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on April 21, 2010 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

Superb accounts of inner struggles my friend... Both poems are fabulous :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on April 21, 2010 at 9:08 AM | link to this | reply

CC - writes of, to me:
Of Stolen ~ resisting and to write of the power of Love is incredible here --- that whisper of a kiss lingers.  Beautiful poetry like the old Bards wrote once ~
and
of Other...hmmm - complex but, I perceive one being caught up in abstract thinking and of personality reasoning ~ this is whoa good with its analogy.  Very nicely written - nicely more "well" written.  E.E.  

posted by elysianfields on April 21, 2010 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Stolen MB
A romantic man are you and an inner feelings conveyed as I read this beautiful poem you don't need Help for you take one on a voyage of lives travels and thoughts.. Blessings Fema Thank your for thinking of me getting better will go for another hospital visit next month with another surgery.

posted by fememefeme on April 21, 2010 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply