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Re: Sam
Well I woudn't say that Sam it just needs a little more perseverance once they have two hot water bottles I somehow think they might splash about a bit.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 12:41 AM
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Re: I have circled to avoid the air of melancholy...
Sorry about that Pat, I sometimes chicken out and comedy is easier.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 12:37 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE BC-A
Sack cloth and ashes today BC
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 12:35 AM
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Re: Shobana
Yes I bought so many pairs of shoes that the laces are redundant in those I use for slippers.
Try to get some sleep, I know it is hard to at times and I know OK
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 12:34 AM
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Re: Simone
Simone you must tell me if I annoy you, don't mean to.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 12:25 AM
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Re: They are great poems C. C. I had to do a little catch up....busy you know
Kabu I see you, don't worry just keep brewing.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 12:23 AM
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Re: E.E.
E.E. you know things that I don't a secret The first one took an hour the second I probably lived through.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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Poor She and He ~ the way life douses the romance --- ah this gives me a sigh - yet, a sweet sigh.
and I adore both of these but Shoe and Jane --- this particular verse, stopped me and I read and re-read - very very good and deep this one:
Time: before the introduction to intangible
forces; glowed in a concentrated manner.
Was it that paradise? Lost forever in the tangle
of sworn prejudices.
oh yes the commitment thing rolls all over this ~
I enjoyed and always do, CC. EE
posted by
elysianfields
on April 20, 2010 at 8:50 PM
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They are great poems C. C. I had to do a little catch up....busy you know
a sick boy to fuss over and worry about. But I wouldn't miss the beauty and truth and fun here for it adds to my day.
posted by
Kabu
on April 20, 2010 at 6:30 PM
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loll CC... funny and well written :-) A delightful combination xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 20, 2010 at 6:07 PM
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Loved it CC, both of the poetry. Got me laughing in the wee hours over here but I don't know CC somehow the lace seems to get in the way.
posted by
shobana
on April 20, 2010 at 2:54 PM
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CORNCAKE
w? In any event you stay hot sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 20, 2010 at 11:10 AM
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I have circled to avoid the air of melancholy...
And the pillow talk poem is evocative. One of those ideas that would be funny if it weren't so close to the bone.
posted by
Pat_B
on April 20, 2010 at 10:46 AM
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In the first one: the honeymoon is definitely over! LOL And in the second one I loved the plastic and lace although leather came to mind immediately! Well done on both! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 20, 2010 at 10:32 AM
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