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I loved 'I feel I can encircle a mountain of thought' WOW!! And I must compliment you on your closes because I never know what I am going to get and it makes it so worth the read! sam
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sam444
on April 20, 2010 at 10:25 AM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Shobana
posted by
C_C_T
on April 18, 2010 at 8:06 AM
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Absolutely captivating and brilliant CC as always. Loved them both.
posted by
shobana
on April 18, 2010 at 2:32 AM
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CORNCRAKE, I read , then reread and then burst out saying Kudos
This is so cleverly written with a dose of humor in the end on Love. I must admit it is in the classical mould that reminds me of poetries old
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anib
on April 18, 2010 at 12:53 AM
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Re: Simone
Thank you Simone, I would like to write about beautiful things all the time ,but we all know that life is not like that and sometimes one writes things that one would like to blog, but wonders if it might not gel. Don't worry you are safe with your love poems. C.C.
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C_C_T
on April 18, 2010 at 12:46 AM
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Re: CORNCRAKE, Silver Land is a masterpiece. Add the power of metaphor to
Thank you dsm I think originally I was thinking of the old fellow's Waste Land. I never read published poet's, for fear of stealing ideas, One feels lazy as one becomes older. C.C.
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C_C_T
on April 18, 2010 at 12:32 AM
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Re: I almost missed my does of Corn today but can't stop reading untilI have
You are too kind today Kabu, but how nice to watch your son grow with some of your talent expressing itself . Be happy.
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C_C_T
on April 18, 2010 at 12:06 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Hi Bill you want to try washing up use Fairy Liquid.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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E.E.
Thank you E.E. comments like your yours keep one going on to the end
posted by
C_C_T
on April 17, 2010 at 11:57 PM
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CC...your writing is Superb - I tip my pen to you ~ That is a powerful poem the first one...it's like a lost letter brought to life. It speaks so passionately and then at the end - such pure Love. I like this a Lot ~
Sinking: reminds me of the Postman always rings twice...I don't know this has some rich imagery and also simply brings around 'washing (over) and feeling' --- yes, it brings emotion. They both do...SUPERB CC ~ from E.E.
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elysianfields
on April 17, 2010 at 11:00 PM
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CORNCAKE
H The new Wasteland is rich. Moreover the kitchen’s personal and plentiful sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on April 17, 2010 at 10:16 PM
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I almost missed my does of Corn today but can't stop reading untilI have
absorbed your words. I love the second one....my youngest son used to do the dishes it was his pocket money job and he would take ages.....hismind working over time . He grew up to be a big name in music in Sydney.....he was always going to be artistic in some way.
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Kabu
on April 17, 2010 at 10:08 PM
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CORNCRAKE, Silver Land is a masterpiece. Add the power of metaphor to
clever use of meter and imperfect rhyming patterns. I loved it!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 17, 2010 at 7:43 AM
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CC... your first poem Silver Land is beautiful... I absolutely loved the images with which you described the changes in your life... in your heart... Truly a masterpiece my friend... The second one was just as great, the thoughts rushing through the mind make the reader wonder what the poet is thinking of only to find out at the end the thoughts are flowing as the dishes are being washed... anyone who has washed dishes knws thoughts do flow then... loll this poem is brilliant! loll Thank you for sharing both. xoxoxo
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Sinome
on April 17, 2010 at 7:31 AM
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