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What avery beauiful gift I enjoyed the read, awesome work!!
posted by
Mystereo
on October 17, 2010 at 9:10 AM
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VERY NICE, THANKS FOR SHARING
posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 13, 2010 at 9:24 AM
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] I like the fantasy in the first one. It might be a freer form. The other two are good Haiku love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 12, 2010 at 10:56 AM
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I like the image of the dandelion
shedding. But do lions shed?
posted by
cpklapper
on April 12, 2010 at 7:17 AM
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The third one is outstanding! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 12, 2010 at 4:20 AM
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A good attempt at haiku, slowly they'll sound more free-flowing.
posted by
Straightforward
on April 12, 2010 at 1:50 AM
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Nice Haikus ... you reminded me of olden high school days when we were asked to write haikus .. it was 9th grade i think to be exact
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on April 12, 2010 at 1:27 AM
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All are nice, but my favorite is the middle one
Thanks for sharing. Regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on April 11, 2010 at 8:35 PM
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