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A LOVING MEMORY THAT BRINGS BACK HOPE
posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 7, 2010 at 8:21 AM
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Like a dew drop on a grass blade
a sunbeam resting on a window pane
a warm,breezy embrace that
makes crop sway
a magical touch that
heals without words!
posted by
shamasehar
on April 6, 2010 at 10:40 PM
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Sweet!
I'm glad everyone is loving this one!
posted by
calia14
on April 6, 2010 at 8:15 PM
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It's moving right along! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 6, 2010 at 7:06 PM
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The addition of a brush stroke to add a glimmer of hope
To the portrait of a heart-broken man in the face of tragedy
An encouraging word in the midst of a poem about hardship
A simple chord that brings a sweetness of sound to a song
a whisper of sound to warm the safety of silence
Kindness as free as a rivulet runs could bring ease
or company of words by weave of caring effects
Moments of calm entrust mend to emotion’s deliverance
While attributes of touch may complement a bested verve
It could all help, or it could not,
because sometimes the hurt is too deep
pain has the heart all tied up in a knot
and so though we would like to wave a magic wand and have all fixed
all we can do is hug the one that weeps
for sorrow will take its toll no matter what we do before sadness leaves,
and no one should be alone at a time like this.
posted by
Sinome
on April 6, 2010 at 4:29 PM
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Calia, I so appreciate your add-on-games...I think it is so fun and shares such camaraderie with your fellow writers. I have a composed verse here that I wrote for your "Subtlety" add-on.
Kindness as free as a rivulet runs could bring ease
or company of words by weave of caring effects
Moments of calm entrust mend to emotion’s deliverance
While attributes of touch may complement a bested verve
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 6, 2010 at 10:42 AM
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a whisper of sound to warm the safety of silence
posted by
spiderfly
on April 6, 2010 at 10:40 AM
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