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I like that word, "fancy" ~ it can mean a few different things. And perhaps your wings come from within a glass but your words reach out and soar. The metaphor and imagery was good here.
and of Dream ~ Sad how 'never' is part of the dream - and how in retrospect life has passed into golden years...seemingly unfulfilled. This is touching ~ E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on April 3, 2010 at 8:22 AM
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Re: That beer must be a powerful brew......LOL
My second poem is always true Kabu. sob, sob.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 3, 2010 at 7:09 AM
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Re: Bill
Thanks Bill would you like a pint?
posted by
C_C_T
on April 3, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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Re: Simone
Thanks Simone, but I don't think you are a beer drinker somehow.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 3, 2010 at 7:05 AM
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Re: Sam
Thanks Sam I think your wings were probably torn off during your climb
posted by
C_C_T
on April 3, 2010 at 7:03 AM
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Re: Shobana
Yes that person was very kind. there is so much kindness around here that I might start collecting photos' of wings One hot day last summer I thought I could die for a glass of beer
I bought a six pack the next day and gave them to my brother-in-law yesterday. One has yo give a good impression.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 3, 2010 at 6:45 AM
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CC - First did you get a kind person to help you with the text yesterday? I loved the 1st poem, Angels do have wings.I am sure of it and they are everywhere. However if you look at it through that glass of beer...I don't know CC :) Your second poem is just as brilliant CC. Thank you for stopping by. Happy Easter to you and yours and thank you for that kind thought - yes I will be happy.
posted by
shobana
on April 3, 2010 at 4:37 AM
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Poignant all the way through! It got me thinking on more than one area and direction! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 3, 2010 at 3:27 AM
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$ Creative expressions of perception sir. BCA, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 2, 2010 at 10:48 PM
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Hmmm I want some of that whatever beer you are drinking :-) Both poems are great... The first one very cute and the second one deep and sad. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 2, 2010 at 3:52 PM
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That beer must be a powerful brew......LOL
AND THE SECOND POEM IS SO SAD.
posted by
Kabu
on April 2, 2010 at 12:09 PM
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