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That was very unfortunate that the roommate withheld such important information! Would not have wanted her karma! sam 

posted by sam444 on March 31, 2010 at 12:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: this is much better, more focused on one event and much more detailed
I'll try and keep that in mind for the next one, unfortunately the time when I was at the cannery is a little hazy. I sort of blocked a lot of that time period out because there was a lot more going on at the time and I remember most of that year like something I read out of a book rather than a normal memory

posted by Allianna on March 31, 2010 at 4:41 AM | link to this | reply

this is much better, more focused on one event and much more detailed

however, you describe the events, but you forgot to mention how it made you feel while all that was going on. What did you do to deal with it, like cry laugh get drunk etc. etc.  try to think back and see if you can come up with some insight on how you dealt with that horrible situation :) I bet it would be fantastic writing :) as well as a great story

 

posted by Tzippy on March 30, 2010 at 11:14 PM | link to this | reply

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