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We we yearn for the past lots of love comes with it
Very nice!! Regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 27, 2010 at 7:22 AM
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Re: SAM
you will have to explain a couplet to me one day Sam. I thought it was something that did up a dress.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 27, 2010 at 4:53 AM
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Re: Loving without commitment so exciting so free ...so transient. KABU
I don't know why I am replying to this before the next week end. Hmm,
posted by
C_C_T
on March 27, 2010 at 4:51 AM
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Re: CornCrake Justi
Not much to survive on Justi, I keep meaning to make a sponge, I bought two special tins a year ago, so I shall have to give it a go. Don't burn the dinner.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 27, 2010 at 4:49 AM
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1 Hold on to the feeling sir. BCA, Bill’s R$st
posted by
BC-A
on March 27, 2010 at 4:48 AM
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Re: Shobana
prob is Shobana one doesn't know the reaction, so one has to be ready to press the delete button sometimes one doesn't care much.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 27, 2010 at 4:45 AM
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Re: E.E.
once I wrote as a young lad The elasticity of Spring only neither I nor the teacher could spell it. It was called composition in those days.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 27, 2010 at 4:41 AM
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Re: Simone
Thanks Simone.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 27, 2010 at 4:35 AM
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Fabulous CC... Loved this one :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on March 26, 2010 at 9:57 PM
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CC such subtle lines of yearning and sadness weave throughout here. This reminds me of a dandelion ~ the soft, down afloat ~ blown wish - I like this writing tremendously. Held me captive for oh, about 3 reads --- E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on March 26, 2010 at 8:15 PM
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How lovely CC - I just love the 'stolen" poems.
posted by
shobana
on March 26, 2010 at 7:33 PM
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CornCrake
You are such a poet. I love this work. Be blessed with this gift you have.
posted by
Justi
on March 26, 2010 at 1:59 PM
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Loving without commitment so exciting so free ...so transient.
Very touching and I felt a pulse of yearning beating thoughout.
posted by
Kabu
on March 26, 2010 at 1:38 PM
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This was a fabulous couplet:
Our arms outstretched we slowly drift apart
Sweet life who knows to where we float
This is just dynamic imagery! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 26, 2010 at 1:10 PM
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