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CC I for one, would not steal from your hole but I'm glad you chose to share a bit here metaphorically ~ and crows --- ah, I like these sassy birds - and I do like their strut and their hop on stiff legs ~ and you know its not often I see a crow as roadkill --- but I have seen a buzzard and a hawk just the other day ~ I think crows are pretty smart. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on March 25, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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Re: Sinome
Thanks Sinome, you are one of the best yourself, if you get my drift.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2010 at 8:28 AM
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Re: Chuck
Hopefully some people read replies Chuck, thank you very much.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2010 at 8:24 AM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
Well Wiley, confession is good for the soul, it just needs a strong basket and a good alarm clock, sometimes there are small deer, of course this only applies to fresh road etc.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2010 at 8:22 AM
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Re: Shobana
Milk maids wear blue overalls and deliver bottles of milk, I'm not sure about blue they come round too early. The real old fashioned milkmaids have yellow hair killer smiles and churns of cream. Now you have just put two on my desk,. please be careful. Well you did ask for advice Shobana, I felt rather embarrassed in case you might delete it.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2010 at 8:18 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE BC
Thanks BC you do award princely comments.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2010 at 8:08 AM
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Re: the hole is what got me, and the crow i just enjoyed
Well as long as you just think about it Tzippy don't try to pinch a bit of it.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2010 at 8:01 AM
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Re: wow I found this interesting,
Alright Symphony despatching you one crow.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2010 at 7:59 AM
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Re: Crows
Thanks Sam. Cough, cough.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 24, 2010 at 7:56 AM
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I really liked the crow one, too! I love it when you give them their own voice, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 24, 2010 at 4:55 AM
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wow I found this interesting,
thanks for sharing...
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 24, 2010 at 12:53 AM
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the hole is what got me, and the crow i just enjoyed
but I think the hole can be so many different things, trying to figure out what you had in mind is too difficult., but fun,, great work!
posted by
Tzippy
on March 23, 2010 at 11:42 PM
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CORNCAKE
l Again you show a very imaginative expression in your poetry. And, Calvin Crow and his flock suggest good morning in crowing sir. BC–A, Bill’s RTTst
posted by
BC-A
on March 23, 2010 at 9:19 PM
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CC - Which reminds me, are there milkmaids anymore? Ok then, we won't disrupt your hole. Now the crow - they have a feast all the time me thinks from what I see here. And now they have also taken over a township! So much so that the authorities are shooting them down, would you believe. Great poems CC - both of them.
And thank you for nearly solving the problem with that class of a poem. You are brilliant CC. Thanks so much for the visit and poem.
posted by
shobana
on March 23, 2010 at 7:50 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I have to admit you've got me crawling around a hole that I can't find the exit from. Ahh, but The Crow one was superb, seems you've studied them as have I, you've got their movements down perfectly, but I won't wan't to steal their road kill feast.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 23, 2010 at 7:40 PM
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I agree with Sinome. You really have a powerful imagination. Also I like the sounds and the way your poems flow.
Thanks for sharing. regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 23, 2010 at 4:14 PM
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Both of them are wonderful. I am amazed at your imagination and creativity :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on March 23, 2010 at 3:55 PM
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I'm not sure about the hole .....but the Crow one I did understand and
altho. I loathe cros it was a great piece. Now I will go back and have another look at the hole.
posted by
Kabu
on March 23, 2010 at 3:45 PM
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