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I really liked the bite of pleasure! BRAVO!!! sam

posted by sam444 on March 24, 2010 at 4:58 AM | link to this | reply

It is as though all light has passed to you

and I just look from far, standing alone.

without the strength to turn and look away.

 

GREAT POEMS EXPRESSING THE HEART, SOMETIMES OUR GREATEST WORK COMES FROM THE DARKEST VALLEY.

posted by Riversidepoet on March 19, 2010 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I remember writing some terrible words when I was depressed back when

Well we all go through some sort of trauma Kabu, Who was that chap who cut of his own ear.

Now that's something, I suppose I could have a bristly hair cut. Thank you for still supporting the fairies. 

posted by C_C_T on March 19, 2010 at 5:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: E.E.
Oh dear E.E. you just inspire me to carry on.

posted by C_C_T on March 19, 2010 at 4:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Shobana
Oh dear Shobana now I can't do a cheeky one straight away 

posted by C_C_T on March 19, 2010 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Stunning...
Thanks Teddy sometimes one has to hit it right.

posted by C_C_T on March 19, 2010 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Tears
It is a great therapy Taps, they hang there for a purpose.

posted by C_C_T on March 19, 2010 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, it must have been, because it all sounds so familiar.  Only this afternoon last I was in that kind of mood and tears came, I know not why, or from whence.  Suddenly there they were, tears running down my cheeks and sobs rising to the front.  And then, everything was all right and I could smile.

posted by TAPS. on March 19, 2010 at 2:46 AM | link to this | reply

Stunning...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on March 18, 2010 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

CC - Heart wrenching poem - the first one. Loved both of them. Thank you for sharing, they are brilliant.

posted by shobana on March 18, 2010 at 7:53 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds like despair and great sadness ~ and it touches my heart ~ CC ---   E.E.
 
and of Wick:
when the role reversal sets in how suddenly it's like a love/hate type situation.  All I know CC is that these writings are deep; soul written - I am so glad you shared ~ E.E.

posted by elysianfields on March 18, 2010 at 6:44 PM | link to this | reply

I remember writing some terrible words when I was depressed back when
it helps to relieve the pain.I can feel real pain and a sense of loss either of love or faith or both in your writing.

posted by Kabu on March 18, 2010 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply