Comments on That's Love

You depict the essence and simplicity of love wonderfully. Your use of the word 'pith' really sums everything up.

posted by 2Philomena on March 25, 2010 at 4:22 AM | link to this | reply

That's what love is all about..........you defined it so well!

posted by shamasehar on March 24, 2010 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

Your last stanza sums it all up very neatly for it can be that way! A fine effort, too! sam

posted by sam444 on March 22, 2010 at 11:55 PM | link to this | reply

Light hearted but very accurate and sensitive

posted by lionreign on March 22, 2010 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

Suddenly I feel a little bit wetter than before I started reading this poem. Interesting effect, that.

posted by WindTapper on March 22, 2010 at 3:35 AM | link to this | reply

posted by manawar on March 20, 2010 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on March 20, 2010 at 3:52 AM | link to this | reply

posted by hazel_st_cricket on March 18, 2010 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

True, true....and I haven't heard the word 'pith' for a long time, either. Nice insertion.

posted by Darson on March 17, 2010 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on March 17, 2010 at 11:11 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Katray2 on March 17, 2010 at 11:06 AM | link to this | reply

I could not have said it any better myself.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 16, 2010 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by janey_ on March 15, 2010 at 11:04 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on March 15, 2010 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

LOve it! xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on March 15, 2010 at 9:10 PM | link to this | reply

~ I like this a lot - so true. and the end ~

~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 15, 2010 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply