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Thanks for the note. It's lovely that your daughter will be with you! I don't know how long Ashish will be in Bangalore--maybe another 4-5 months--so maybe you and I will both be here sometime before that!
posted by
Nita09
on March 17, 2010 at 3:17 AM
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Shama - That was cute the way you said Hum Tum - I saw that movie with Saif Ali Khan and Preity Zinta..hilarious. Thank you for reading my poetry too. I am glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on March 16, 2010 at 3:41 PM
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Re: Hi,Nita
Thanks! I am fine.My daughter is coming over from Bangalore next month to spend a month with us here so in the near future I dont see any possibility.Are you in Bangalore? How is Ashish doing? My good wishes to both of you.
posted by
shamasehar
on March 14, 2010 at 8:43 AM
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Profound wisdom. Thanks for your visit; hope you're doing well. Any chance of coming to Bangalore in the next 2 months?
posted by
Nita09
on March 14, 2010 at 4:48 AM
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Thanks Shama for the visit. Read this poem again. I am glad you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on March 14, 2010 at 3:16 AM
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Hi, Shama
Oundhe makan, equated with the convoluted house, ego, is fanrastic imagery. Mazaa aa gaya.
posted by
anib
on March 12, 2010 at 12:44 AM
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This lack of safety seems good!
posted by
Straightforward
on March 11, 2010 at 3:44 PM
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the surging deluge of love
washes away all on its way!
GREAT LINE, THANKS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 11, 2010 at 9:03 AM
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How very poignant! Fine work, indeed! I agree with Shobana! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 11, 2010 at 5:59 AM
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Shama - You have described "Washed Away" so excellently.
posted by
shobana
on March 10, 2010 at 10:18 PM
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