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I read this again and it is pure entertainment with a hint of reality! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 12, 2010 at 9:27 AM
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On the family poem, I could so relate! Divorce is never easy but at times there is no other recourse for I have been there! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 6, 2010 at 6:30 AM
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The Family ~ How utterly (near) normal - and I find the whole scene so interesting. Just superb truly, Corncrake ~
and The Divorce ~ such sadness period.
~ it moved me ~ E.L.
posted by
elysianfields
on March 4, 2010 at 9:46 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I loved the family poem very much, the divorce one is excellent too but I have an aversion to things I fail at like a marriage
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 4, 2010 at 9:03 PM
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Re: The Family
No, I still don't understand it as well as I'd like to, but that's me. I look forward to your stuff! And ... what's a corncrake?
posted by
2902
on March 4, 2010 at 7:51 PM
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THAT FAMILY IN THE FIRST POEM , ALL SO REALISTIC.
posted by
Kabu
on March 4, 2010 at 9:35 AM
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VERY INTERESTING READ, MUST READ AGAIN, THANKS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 4, 2010 at 8:33 AM
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CORNCAKE
R I enjoyed this pair of poems about different points of life . BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on March 4, 2010 at 4:35 AM
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The Family
Wonderful work! There's a lot of vaporous verse out there that I never finish reading because it's so abstract and unfocused, but these 2 poems were a delight to read - more than once. One or two individual spots in the second one puzzle me, but the whole mood of it really gets me.
posted by
2902
on March 4, 2010 at 4:06 AM
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