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I was taken by the last line, too! It really wrapped up the imagery quite nicely! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 6, 2010 at 6:34 AM
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Chimney Sweep
Wonderfully done I could feel myself there watching their every move and of course the mark of a successful sweep across her little cheek. Loved it I just had my chimney cleaned by me and my hands were the mark of suet . Fema Hi MB! missed you.
posted by
fememefeme
on February 26, 2010 at 3:22 PM
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Love the last line ---as chimney 'sweep' across her cheek ~ very delightful - desire among the ashes.
~Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 26, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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QUITE A VISITOR, THANKS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on February 26, 2010 at 8:51 AM
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I hope she needs a lot of Chimneys swept. I could wish for a man
with just a touch cleaner occupation.
posted by
Kabu
on February 26, 2010 at 8:17 AM
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