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That's all one can ask, an honest assessment or you time and their time has been wasted! sam

posted by sam444 on February 23, 2010 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

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J T Good luck with the project and getting the right feedback that’ll help your creativity love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on February 20, 2010 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

I hope that brutally honest...
is also constructive. Writng is such a personal thing. You are taking the right steps...God Bless! Keep Looking Up! Dan

posted by PVDannyC on February 19, 2010 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

we write because we have to .....................this was a great idea
and any constructive criticism will helpyou find what is wanted ..for this or another story. It is wonderfulto have found this person. whohoo

posted by Kabu on February 19, 2010 at 7:11 PM | link to this | reply

I'm so glad that you're writing a book. Curious to see what the feedback is and how you respond to it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 19, 2010 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

Have you thought of having a 3rd or 4th grader read it?
You'll get great truthful feedback from them.  (Or if it's intended for older kids, an older kid could read it.) Also,  I'll bet the children's librarian will be a wonderful reviewer. Impartial and knowledgeable.    Write on!

posted by Pat_B on February 19, 2010 at 1:50 PM | link to this | reply