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Re: I am off tobed because it is so late here but saw you had posted
Hi Kabu, I don't think you'll be disappointed when we get to Loretta's next move. So happy to see you're enjoying the story. Have a great day, Lucinia
posted by
LuciW86
on February 17, 2010 at 6:45 PM
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Re: Excellent.
Thank you, Hackthorne for the encouraging note. I'm a big fan of the old black and white movies where lots of action was left to the imagination of the viewer.
posted by
LuciW86
on February 17, 2010 at 6:44 PM
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Re: Good work... my idea of a great reconciliation, as far as that goes...
Hi Pat, after we get through Lindsey's meeting with Ken, Loretta may surprise us with her next move.
posted by
LuciW86
on February 17, 2010 at 6:42 PM
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Re: Sam444
Thanks very much, Sam. Have a great day, Lucinia
posted by
LuciW86
on February 17, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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A most excellent post for the story! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 17, 2010 at 1:56 PM
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Good work... my idea of a great reconciliation, as far as that goes...
And now what?
posted by
Pat_B
on February 17, 2010 at 5:13 AM
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Excellent.
Very well written. You led the reader's imagination without actually writing what was happening. This is called "showing" in writing circles, as I said excellent.
posted by
Hackthorne19
on February 17, 2010 at 2:09 AM
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I am off tobed because it is so late here but saw you had posted
so just had to read. see you really have me hooked.
posted by
Kabu
on February 16, 2010 at 9:57 PM
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