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posted by Sinome on March 12, 2010 at 9:03 PM | link to this | reply

 I salute you BernieF ~ I hope with you that people do heed that they need to take more care of our Earth --- Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 13, 2010 at 8:15 PM | link to this | reply

The mortal guardian
Beautiful imagery with an stern warning.

posted by 2Philomena on February 12, 2010 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

Earth
Nice!  Ever read Bill Bryson's A Short History of Nearly Everything?  He makes this wonderful comparison - how thick is the envelope of breathable atmosphere around our Earth?  Well, it's the thickness of one coat of shellac on a standard sized desk globe.  That got my attention, I can tell you!

posted by 2902 on February 11, 2010 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem with a good advice      Chuck.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on February 10, 2010 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

This is one fantastic poem! So rich in imagery and what a proclamation, too! sam

posted by sam444 on February 10, 2010 at 6:41 PM | link to this | reply

Very nicely said!
a nice poem of great conscience and a little education too

posted by lionreign on February 10, 2010 at 11:13 AM | link to this | reply

Bernie
As you know God steps in before man tries to destroy the world and we must take care of what He has given us some do and of course some don't..Enjoyed the truth. Blessings. Fema

posted by fememefeme on February 10, 2010 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

Imaginative and informative. T BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on February 10, 2010 at 3:30 AM | link to this | reply

Gaurdian
Very true Bernie, it is amazing to think that something like this is so fragile and has protected us for so long. Nicely portrayed 

posted by C_C_T on February 10, 2010 at 2:00 AM | link to this | reply