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For me the cheaters are only remorseful when caught. I don't think I could get past the infidelity. This was well done, too. I could feel the characters' plights. sam
posted by
sam444
on February 8, 2010 at 4:42 AM
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Re: Keep going.
You're right, Benny is really remorseful, as you'll notice in part two of chapter twelve.
posted by
LuciW86
on February 7, 2010 at 6:52 PM
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Re: good going, you write as if it were happening to you right now
It's fiction, although one or two scenarios have been borrowed from real-life situations and stretched out.
posted by
LuciW86
on February 7, 2010 at 6:50 PM
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Re: powerful write...
I appreciate that, Kabu.
posted by
LuciW86
on February 7, 2010 at 6:47 PM
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Re: I wish I could write like you .
What a nice compliment. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.
posted by
LuciW86
on February 7, 2010 at 6:46 PM
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I wish I could write like you .
posted by
afzal50
on February 7, 2010 at 5:46 PM
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powerful write...
posted by
Kabu
on February 7, 2010 at 12:36 PM
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good going, you write as if it were happening to you right now
and i always have to remember that it is fiction.
are you sure it is fiction?
posted by
Tzippy
on February 6, 2010 at 11:54 PM
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Keep going.
I can sort of feel for Benny. It was, no doubt, a fling that went wrong, no? Write on!
posted by
Hackthorne19
on February 6, 2010 at 9:50 PM
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