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Excellently said!
I nodded my way through this poem too
posted by
lionreign
on February 2, 2010 at 8:48 AM
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wow written so perfect....
sure made me nod in agreement...
posted by
_Symphony_
on February 2, 2010 at 1:32 AM
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Re: Children of God
Fema thank you for your kind comments and for sharing your story with me BF
posted by
BernieFranklin
on February 1, 2010 at 10:17 PM
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Children of God
Bernie I enjoyed reading this very true story of being a parent and the cycle one goes through and death itself. I appreciate your journey. For me I never had children but became a great great Aunty..I've had the opportunity to help when in need and the one saving grace for me was when my Mom came to live with me 15 years ago as she and I lived together.. I loved her very much and couldn't do enough for her for what she deserved but she and I were very happy and she went on to Heaven two years ago October..Now she has no pain or suffering,only walking the streets of gold in Heaven glorifying Jesus..Lv Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on February 1, 2010 at 6:57 PM
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Children of God, indeed! What a fantastic poem! Boy, it resonated with me that we can take so much more from our children! Well done!!!! You are really writing some very nice poetry of late! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 1, 2010 at 6:32 PM
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offspring
you've said it all here Bernie
practicality strikes again.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 1, 2010 at 12:26 PM
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