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Re: you write as if it is happening right now
Thanks, Tzippy.  I'm a lot like Lindsey, independent but weak when it comes to relationships with men.

posted by LuciW86 on February 1, 2010 at 5:12 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, Darson.  It's so nice to be able to share this

posted by LuciW86 on February 1, 2010 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: You are a wonderful writer and you have won my heart .
Thank you so much for the encouraging words.

posted by LuciW86 on February 1, 2010 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

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I'm so glad you enjoy the story.  This next part is sad.

posted by LuciW86 on February 1, 2010 at 4:55 PM | link to this | reply

Worry is such a bane; but in this case it is seemingly troublesome! You are do a very fine job with this story! Very adept at the first person writing, too! sam

posted by sam444 on February 1, 2010 at 4:15 PM | link to this | reply

You are a wonderful writer and you have won my heart .

posted by afzal50 on February 1, 2010 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

I agree with Tzippy. It's very realistic and enjoyable, the way you write.

posted by Darson on February 1, 2010 at 7:51 AM | link to this | reply

you write as if it is happening right now
i keep checking to see if its a fictional blog :)

posted by Tzippy on February 1, 2010 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply