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Re: Highly captivating episode.
Thanks very much.

posted by LuciW86 on January 31, 2010 at 5:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I will be back to read more.
I'm very happy to hear that.  Thanks.

posted by LuciW86 on January 31, 2010 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good stuff.
Thanks Hackthorne.  The story takes place in 1996/1997 but that would have been a good end for him.

posted by LuciW86 on January 31, 2010 at 5:45 PM | link to this | reply

I will be back to read more.

posted by _Symphony_ on January 31, 2010 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

Okay, you've got my rapt attention.
Quick, what happens next?

posted by Pat_B on January 31, 2010 at 6:08 AM | link to this | reply

Highly captivating episode.

posted by afzal50 on January 31, 2010 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply

I know that feeling of inviting and not having the room! You are doing a fine job of telling this story! sam

posted by sam444 on January 31, 2010 at 12:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Good stuff.
Hackthorne19 no no, LOL. I disagree too trite and easy. We have something way more imaginative to look forward toI am sure. He must come back.

posted by Kabu on January 30, 2010 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Good stuff.
I wonder whether he'll get caught up in the earthquake and never return. Write on!

posted by Hackthorne19 on January 30, 2010 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply