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I loved how the character just came out and asked the question! It gives it a very realistic feel to the story! And I totally agree with Pat, you do very well with first person! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 29, 2010 at 8:50 PM
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Re: I have a hard time writing fiction in first-person, but you do it well.
Thank you, Pat. I shut myself away and pretend I'm the person I'm writing about. Weird, but it helps some.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 29, 2010 at 6:33 PM
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Re: very intimate and extremely well written. I can see trouble coming though.
You're right, Kabu, trouble is right around the corner, and his real character comes out.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 29, 2010 at 6:31 PM
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You're right, he's a real scoundrel.
posted by
LuciW86
on January 29, 2010 at 6:28 PM
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I tend to agree with Pat B.. very hard to write first-pesron fiction .. the dialogue flows well. I don't trust him, by the way...! He knows too much about women, apparently... sorry if I am misreading him.. smile..
posted by
mneme
on January 29, 2010 at 9:18 AM
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very intimate and extremely well written. I can see trouble coming though.
posted by
Kabu
on January 29, 2010 at 8:46 AM
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I have a hard time writing fiction in first-person, but you do it well.
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on January 29, 2010 at 6:00 AM
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