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I love it! This imagery is far reaching and can become quite an analogy, too! KUDOS! The end was fantastic! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 27, 2010 at 3:15 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Bill do you think if praise comes through the door, talent flies out the window?
posted by
C_C_T
on January 27, 2010 at 12:27 AM
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Re: Taps
A kind father,some would not have been so tolerant and you remember this now with affection I hope.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 27, 2010 at 12:19 AM
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Re: Corncrake
Yes, well I am made to feel like on sometimes, Wiley where's that ant powder?
posted by
C_C_T
on January 27, 2010 at 12:17 AM
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Re: well it pays to keep your wits about you other wise squash and you're gone.
Very true Kabu. I remember the kids at school with magnifying glasses scorching the little fellows as they ran.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 27, 2010 at 12:14 AM
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CORNCAKE
: You really let your imagination go in your poems. You seem to have a talent in using surrealism on the human body. Excellent! BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on January 26, 2010 at 11:28 PM
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Corncrake
I liked that, the lowly ant turning into well crafted poetry.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 26, 2010 at 7:41 PM
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My Dad used to quote that Bible verse to us kids when he saw us being lazy,
"Go to the ant thou sluggard and consider her ways and be wise." He never said anything about the boot.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 26, 2010 at 2:46 PM
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Corncrake
Well there always seems to be someone with a pair of size 10's to spoil your day, I liked it. BF
posted by
BernieFranklin
on January 26, 2010 at 2:44 PM
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well it pays to keep your wits about you other wise squash and you're gone.
posted by
Kabu
on January 26, 2010 at 12:21 PM
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