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pretty good
That was really good.  I lkie that

posted by daizymarie on January 15, 2010 at 6:24 AM | link to this | reply

> I mean excellent!
Your words revolve in an awesome love poem. 201KBC-A, Bill’sRJLsteJ

posted by BC-A on January 14, 2010 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

This is definitely one of the best poems I have read. Just love it and welcome.

posted by shobana on January 13, 2010 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply

I thought this to be very fine imagery, all the way through! Of the many lines that could be cited, I found this one to be exquisite: I dangle from your etched fingerprints like a puppeteer engineering life into a marionette. sam

posted by sam444 on January 13, 2010 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply