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Whoa, I could feel the sensations of being..
a snake. That is a gift indeed!
posted by
LizaM
on January 1, 2010 at 8:51 PM
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Like this much!!!
posted by
momma_mia
on January 1, 2010 at 8:52 AM
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Wow, you have a great imagination! Very nice
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on January 1, 2010 at 7:47 AM
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Another incredible close; but I really liked this tercet:
Not so, I can verify I have entwined a grape vine.
Baked in the hot imagination of my species.
Smoothly resisting the warm stroke of affection.
Just one of the fine examples of the poem, well done on all levels! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 1, 2010 at 3:37 AM
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