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Yes a real nice flow to these poems,
keep writing
posted by
C_C_T
on December 31, 2009 at 11:24 PM
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Deep and sensual..
Wow,
impressive..
posted by
LizaM
on December 31, 2009 at 8:10 AM
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I like your rhythm...it's great to read. and I have to re-read - this is deep.
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on December 30, 2009 at 9:07 PM
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WOnderful work :-) A happy one for you and yours :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on December 30, 2009 at 8:26 PM
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yeah baby......music does it though....
posted by
Star5_
on December 30, 2009 at 5:17 PM
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I like the use of sports metaphors.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 30, 2009 at 3:34 PM
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Happy New Year and thank you for your posts.
posted by
Kabu
on December 30, 2009 at 2:10 PM
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What a lot of poignant imagery! I hardly know where to begin, but the set up at outset was fabulous, then it feels like everything is perfectly exquisite and boom, the bottom falls out but it is still hopeful! Kudos! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 30, 2009 at 2:07 PM
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