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I would be nervous about jumping with all the bomb and such! I did like the build up, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 21, 2009 at 2:36 PM
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It's good. I still get a sense of unspoken tension. This ain't
a trip to the mall, exactly...
posted by
Pat_B
on November 17, 2009 at 4:46 AM
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The details about the tear and the young man's question about being buried alive give this an extra human interest dimension, which is very good IMO.
posted by
elinjo
on November 16, 2009 at 5:25 AM
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