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Lionreign ~.~
Thank you so much for your indepth comment on this piece and for your suggestion of its deeper meaning. I truly appreciate it. Peace, blessings and understanding.
~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 8:49 AM
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SoulSpeaker
This poem is, for me a layered metaphor which encompasses the process of thinking (something I am prone to do before each write is let my mind wander where it will for a while until I find my topic for the day) and deeper it provides a beautiful metaphor for life itself. Thank you for sharing this and have a beautiful weekend
posted by
lionreign
on October 23, 2009 at 8:31 AM
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Troosha ~.~
Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. The mind...with all of its intricacies and complexities can very often, with few and quite simple calculations, figure out itself. (A line I deleted from the poem -- couldn't figure out where it would work.) Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 7:20 AM
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This took me away, Soul… there, in your words and my thoughts, I visited the “new” and the “strangely familiar”. Well done!
posted by
Troosha
on October 23, 2009 at 6:57 AM
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Shobana ~.~
You're welcome! ...and thank you for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 5:34 AM
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Elyse ~.~
Thank you for the lovely comment. You always make me smile. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:21 AM
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Chuck ~.~
Thank you! ...glad you liked it -- especially the close. I appreciate your comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:20 AM
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sam ~.~
Yes...sometimes it's a very nice place to be. Thanks -- glad you liked it! Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:18 AM
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shemasehar ~.~
Thank you! I appreciate your comment. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:15 AM
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Nileangel ~.~
Thank you very much! Be blessed! Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:14 AM
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TAPS ~.~
That's for sure! Thanks for commenting. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:13 AM
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RomaKay ~.~
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:12 AM
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joab ~.~
...and a bit difficult to do while lost in the mind's maze!
Thanks so much for your comment and your visit. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:11 AM
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Maria ~. ~
Thanks very much for visiting. I hope you enjoyed your stay. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:04 AM
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MandaLee ~.~
Thank you so much for visiting. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS
posted by
soulspeaker
on October 23, 2009 at 4:03 AM
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Soulspeaker - This is simply beautiful. I love the last 2 lines very much and can relate to it. Thank you so much for your visit to my blog and liking my poem. Lotus Leafs are to be admired for a great many reasons.
posted by
shobana
on October 22, 2009 at 8:22 PM
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Your level of wisdom is to be admired ~ and I cannot praise your pen enough for this insightful, inspiring work of art ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 22, 2009 at 8:56 AM
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A place we feel we've been before though with every visit a new quest is born as in the quiet stillness of solitude we become deeply lost in thought I love the last four lines Thank you for sharing. Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 22, 2009 at 2:55 AM
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I love to get lost deep in thought! So enjoyed this imagery, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 22, 2009 at 2:51 AM
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A very thoughtful one!
posted by
shamasehar
on October 21, 2009 at 10:04 PM
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Very nice. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 21, 2009 at 7:35 PM
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That's good! Much nicer than being in a maze of unfamiliarity.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 21, 2009 at 6:57 PM
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very nice
posted by
RomaKay
on October 21, 2009 at 4:06 PM
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THE MAZE OF FAMILIARITY
Very introspective without losing one's perspective.
joab
posted by
joab3
on October 21, 2009 at 3:18 PM
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