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It is dark in here

I whisper to you...

I feel the breath

Is this you?

Fear is carrying the thoughts so blue

Stay with me close.... I am fightened too....

posted by merkie on October 23, 2009 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Good starting.  I'll have to think on it.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on October 21, 2009 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

You can add as much as you want to Sam!  I'll probably end up adding more myself.

posted by calia14 on October 21, 2009 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

Re: RomaKay

Thanks for the clarification!  Great lines

posted by calia14 on October 21, 2009 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

 

His time is limited for he makes an annual run

Devoid of ammunitation or loaded gun;

He is menace and preys upon the weak and frail;

His swath without reason nor rhyme, leaves a deadly trail!

It might be too early to come up with a decent stanza, but here is mine! And if it beats me to death mentally, today, I will return to improve! Have a wonderful day, too! sammy

posted by sam444 on October 21, 2009 at 7:03 AM | link to this | reply

that stalks through the night, silent

 

freezing the river's voice

but listen and hear how the wind cries.

 

Hey. There are two different stories going on in the story time blog. Both totally different from each other. Hawk is still they way it was before, but I'm throwu=ing Grey in to as its being written to get some feedback on it. I'm glad to be back!

 

posted by RomaKay on October 21, 2009 at 4:36 AM | link to this | reply