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sam444
...longing....yes, I think that's correct. We women seem to have a limit as to how long we can go without romance...not the physical kind, but the more direct, brain-candy that comes from a well-timed compiment or a flirty look...we know when we're due and then the longing does set in. You're right.

posted by Darson on October 12, 2009 at 5:14 PM | link to this | reply

An excellent rendition of preoccupation and the longing! sam

posted by sam444 on October 12, 2009 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
Thank you, I agree. I believe that almost anything can be revived, with some effort! I'm a hopeless (make that hope-full) romantic.

posted by Darson on October 11, 2009 at 11:44 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS
...You didn't! I accidentally put it into opinion, not the poetry section...in trying to cut and paste I removed and deleted! Not intentional. Will see if I can re-create it....inspired by a VERY weird dream I had this morning...it took a while for me to come out of it, it was bad, and so realistic...ever have dreams like that? Thank you, as always, Taps!

posted by Darson on October 11, 2009 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

I do hope he didbut sometimes love fades or is aloud by one or both to
becomemundane. So sad when love dies. or is killed.

posted by Kabu on October 11, 2009 at 11:16 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful.  It does seem that year by year, some men's passion seems to cool and they begin to take all things for granted, not realizing that women need that continued passionate assurance.

I was just reading a newly posted writing of yours and it just disappeared on me and is not there now.  I hope I didn't do it. 

posted by TAPS. on October 11, 2009 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha

posted by Darson on October 11, 2009 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

chuck ibrahim
Thank You, Chuck!

posted by Darson on October 11, 2009 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply

elysianfields

posted by Darson on October 11, 2009 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply

9STAR
Thank you.

posted by Darson on October 11, 2009 at 7:24 AM | link to this | reply

Darson

How poignant and I suspect we’ve all had a yearning moment such as this at one time or another.  Great write!

posted by Troosha on October 11, 2009 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

Very touching and very romantic  thanks for sharing.  Chuck.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on October 11, 2009 at 6:29 AM | link to this | reply

 --- love speaks in many languages and in silence as well ~ this touched my heart. Elyse

posted by elysianfields on October 11, 2009 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

wow!

posted by Star5_ on October 10, 2009 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply