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Writing, what a delight, such a good read. Blessed Be.
posted by
Nileangel
on October 8, 2009 at 4:42 PM
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Take it all in, of all time (see the comment by sam). The answer’s there. But, you can write this far now, before you know what to write next. Excellent! BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
posted by
BC-A
on October 7, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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that is a hell of a write, love it
posted by
rickmenace
on October 7, 2009 at 8:55 PM
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...read this several times...still rolling it over in my mind...well done...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on October 7, 2009 at 7:57 PM
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I took great interest in this one for it lead me on a quest to finish in my mind's with the twist after the 8th line! I like the feel of centuries gone by and those decorated poets! It is like reviving a lost form and flow! I thought all of it was very well constructed! It was great flow on the iambic pentameter, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 7, 2009 at 11:31 AM
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Excellent A pleasure to read.
posted by
merkie
on October 7, 2009 at 9:57 AM
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