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never heard the word 'unlove'...that's a good one....

posted by Darson on October 2, 2009 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

From closed to open
in punctuation

an interesting way of expressing


posted by cpklapper on September 27, 2009 at 8:12 PM | link to this | reply

...hmm...endless? endless loop?...hmmm...moon

posted by magic_moon on September 26, 2009 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

Nighthawk
Yup - this is pretty cool writing...  I had to stop every once in a while and catch up with your thinking but that's a good thing. 

posted by Troosha on September 26, 2009 at 11:02 AM | link to this | reply

So creative is your form and the imagery is Wow... I enjoy your poetry Elyse

posted by elysianfields on September 25, 2009 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

Lone indeed; splendid imagery and I adored the presentation! sam

posted by sam444 on September 25, 2009 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

How fun that you came back after being gone so long.  I love for past bloggers to return.
Fascinating structure to this interesting poem. 

posted by TAPS. on September 25, 2009 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful work...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on September 25, 2009 at 5:45 PM | link to this | reply