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Oh, wow I think that you’ve stated passion in words love. BC-A, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink
posted by
BC-A
on September 18, 2009 at 8:35 AM
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rick
like that? lol, i love this
posted by
rickmenace
on September 17, 2009 at 5:44 PM
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I like the way this poem builds.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 17, 2009 at 4:27 PM
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Calia
Excellent momentum! I could feel the hunger and passion for living life to its fullest.
posted by
Troosha
on September 17, 2009 at 10:00 AM
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This is great my friend!
wonderful imagery and very well written; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on September 17, 2009 at 6:18 AM
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Phew! You must be exhausted! A great write!
It did make me wonder if you are 'running from'-or 'trying to find'? It feels familiar to my past. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 17, 2009 at 3:46 AM
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Re: hardilaziz
Didn't really think of it that way, but yeah, I suppose it is.
posted by
calia14
on September 17, 2009 at 2:29 AM
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I like the hunger depicted, of one's choosing, too! I like how yo keep your lines in such uniformity so that the cadence and the imagery complement each other! KUDOS!!! sammy
posted by
sam444
on September 16, 2009 at 11:38 PM
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Is this the concrete jungle
posted by
hardilaziz
on September 16, 2009 at 7:25 PM
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Your words make me think of Divine transformation. Very nice.
posted by
Nileangel
on September 16, 2009 at 7:17 PM
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