Go to Calia's Poetry Corner
- Add a comment
- Go to Hungry
Oh, wow I think that you’ve stated passion in words love. BC-A, Bill*s Cyberspace Hotlink
posted by
BC-A
on
September 18, 2009
at
8:35 AM
| |
reply
rick
like that? lol, i love this
posted by
rickmenace
on
September 17, 2009
at
5:44 PM
| |
reply
I like the way this poem builds.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on
September 17, 2009
at
4:27 PM
| |
reply
Calia
Excellent momentum! I could feel the hunger and passion for living life to its fullest.
posted by
Troosha
on
September 17, 2009
at
10:00 AM
| |
reply
This is great my friend!
wonderful imagery and very well written; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on
September 17, 2009
at
6:18 AM
| |
reply
Phew! You must be exhausted! A great write!
It did make me wonder if you are 'running from'-or 'trying to find'? It feels familiar to my past. Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on
September 17, 2009
at
3:46 AM
| |
reply
Re: hardilaziz
Didn't really think of it that way, but yeah, I suppose it is.
posted by
calia14
on
September 17, 2009
at
2:29 AM
| |
reply
I like the hunger depicted, of one's choosing, too! I like how yo keep your lines in such uniformity so that the cadence and the imagery complement each other! KUDOS!!! sammy
posted by
sam444
on
September 16, 2009
at
11:38 PM
| |
reply
Is this the concrete jungle
posted by
hardilaziz
on
September 16, 2009
at
7:25 PM
| |
reply
Your words make me think of Divine transformation. Very nice.
posted by
Nileangel
on
September 16, 2009
at
7:17 PM
| |
reply
Copy (or write down) this comment's web address (URL), which is:
Next, go to the email or web page where you want to link to this comment, and paste
(or type) the web address.
