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This is superb! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 5, 2009 at 10:53 PM
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I was going to ask the same thing - is there more?
posted by
adnohr
on September 5, 2009 at 10:33 PM
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I know a place with that kind of mood. The candle makes good imagery. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on September 5, 2009 at 9:30 PM
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Great imagery and I like your descriptive writing techniques, and the story sure let me hang on to it and full of suspense and anticipation, and then end makes me feel that there's something more....
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on September 5, 2009 at 8:38 PM
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