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I am with Elinjo, simply brilliant! I congratulate you!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 24, 2009 at 8:26 AM
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Brilliant ending! Well done.
I loved the detail about the blood swamping the nicely manicured lawn.
posted by
elinjo
on August 24, 2009 at 7:18 AM
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Detail by detail, believably done. Your mind's eye can see everything.
posted by
Pat_B
on August 24, 2009 at 4:50 AM
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Am I wrong..
to assume that this is the end, or will there be a closing episode? Either way, that was a great climax and ending.. no unnecessary stalling. Great story..
posted by
orcalion
on August 24, 2009 at 3:47 AM
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