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Just like us humans-occasionally mariaki! Many thanks. Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 18, 2009 at 2:54 AM | link to this | reply

Not far off merkie! It does not stay long! Thanks.Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 18, 2009 at 2:53 AM | link to this | reply

Many thanks Shoban! Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 18, 2009 at 2:52 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much chuck! Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 18, 2009 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

So do I Kabu-there seems no need to go out to buy expensive plants/seeds
whilst there are so many beautiful wild flowers--so natural! Many thanks.Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 18, 2009 at 2:51 AM | link to this | reply

What I was 'seeing' Soul Builder-was the Butterflies taking all the pollen
goodness out from the Dandelion-thereby exhausting the wild flower!And yes-it rested.Thanks.Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 18, 2009 at 2:49 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent imagery Chris!
I can just see the poor flower's head drooping with fatigue! Many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on August 18, 2009 at 2:40 AM | link to this | reply

The summer is soon to be over!  Good one Chris!

posted by merkie on August 17, 2009 at 10:53 PM | link to this | reply

I like how the flower get exhausted..

posted by shobana on August 17, 2009 at 10:41 PM | link to this | reply

I love your vision of things Nice work.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on August 17, 2009 at 10:01 PM | link to this | reply

we have the most beautiful wild flowers here I love them all

posted by Kabu on August 17, 2009 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Its like the end of the day, now I rest!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on August 17, 2009 at 6:32 PM | link to this | reply

As I said to Troosha - Rumor-the Dandelions are 'resting' now but will be
bright and fresh in the morning with a renewed vibrance! If I don't let anyone 'mow' round here-they'll certainly be around for a while! 'Butterflies kissing' the Dandelions-well it certainly looks like the little white ones are doing! Thanks Rumor.Chris. 

posted by Scramble on August 17, 2009 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

So very warm today sam-that there have been dozens of Butterflies
flitting from the dandelions to the Budlea! They are Beautifull to watch! Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 17, 2009 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

They are only exhausted for the 'day' Troosha--they have curled themselves
up now-for the night-whilst they 'recuperate'!They will be as fresh as daisies-in the morning-and for at least-another month!(I hope)-with further fresh pollen for the Butterflies to re-visit and 'kiss' them.Many thanks.Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 17, 2009 at 1:27 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you so much Lilane! Chris.

posted by Scramble on August 17, 2009 at 1:24 PM | link to this | reply

"butterflies kissing" - now there's an image that could lead into a larger
poem, or into a story..."flower exhausted" - likewise, I hope not yet for a month or even two (since it took summer so long to get here)...........

posted by Rumor on August 17, 2009 at 11:09 AM | link to this | reply

The way they buzz around mine, I could see your imagery perfectly! I love this one! sam

posted by sam444 on August 17, 2009 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

Say it isn't so - that the flowers are exhausted.....
I want them to keep smiling at me for at least another month....

posted by Troosha on August 17, 2009 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

how cute what a vision

posted by Lanetay on August 17, 2009 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply