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Excellent!
posted by
Sinome
on July 29, 2009 at 5:45 AM
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Wow this is powerful....
Reninds me of a quote I read this morning.
"The art of life is the art of avoiding pain; and he is the best pilot, who steers clearest of the rocks and shoals with which it is beset."
Thomas Jefferson (1743-1826), U.S. president. Letter, 12 Oct. 1786, to Maria Cosway.
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posted by
Raphael222
on July 29, 2009 at 5:21 AM
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Very deep poem! Thats life!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 28, 2009 at 7:11 PM
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Loved it! Passionate indeed and very well written. Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on July 28, 2009 at 4:57 PM
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It will fall that way! I liked the rhyme scheme, it set a wonderful cadence! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 28, 2009 at 3:50 PM
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posted by
Ariala
on July 28, 2009 at 1:17 PM
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