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I like this, it makes me think
posted by
Lanetay
on July 29, 2009 at 7:00 AM
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Incredible as always.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 27, 2009 at 8:40 PM
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I believe that when that day comes I'll do like the Indians used to.....
gofora walk in the snow.
posted by
Kabu
on July 27, 2009 at 7:30 PM
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Beautiful
To define that moment as one of absolute growth is somehow uplifting and utterly enchanting
posted by
lionreign
on July 27, 2009 at 8:18 AM
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Sinome
Maybe it won’t be a moment of fear or loneliness… maybe, just maybe, in that moment we feel a sense of peace regardless of all those things we missed or wanted or never fulfilled. Maybe we say to ourselves “Job well done…" and we forgive ourselves for all our shortcomings. Let’s hope.
posted by
Troosha
on July 27, 2009 at 7:25 AM
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posted by
shamasehar
on July 27, 2009 at 12:07 AM
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One always wants somehow for the love to be more but even that is usually not enough
posted by
Azur
on July 26, 2009 at 10:41 PM
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Sinome
Oh such a touching poem. The closer I get to that time the more I feel the lines of this poem. I want so to tell others there is more, it is not tangible, but it is awesome. The more love you give away the more you keep. God did such a magical thing when he created man as clunky as we behave some times, it is so incredible we are here as long as we are which is so, so short.
posted by
Justi
on July 26, 2009 at 10:39 PM
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