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I know just how that feels

The wait is always longer than the event

posted by lionreign on July 27, 2009 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

A poem fittingly short

given its subject.  Thanks for stopping by my blog!

Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on July 26, 2009 at 3:53 PM | link to this | reply

I so understand the poignancy of this one! BRAVO!!! sam

posted by sam444 on July 25, 2009 at 10:21 PM | link to this | reply

hardilaziz, yes, you've captured that waiting well in this quote....

posted by Rumor on July 25, 2009 at 3:44 PM | link to this | reply

Oh!  You so well expressed the maddening wait between glimpses of a new love.

posted by calia14 on July 25, 2009 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

Very 'in love' verse!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on July 24, 2009 at 7:34 PM | link to this | reply

Short and powerful! Thanks for stopping by. Nita.

posted by snowview on July 24, 2009 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply

Nice one hardilaziz! Chris.

posted by Scramble on July 24, 2009 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re:

Thanks mate.  Wish you a pleasant weekend!

posted by hardilaziz on July 24, 2009 at 8:59 AM | link to this | reply

 Your lines are as refreshing as a sprig of mistletoe.  BCA, Bill’s RJJst

 

posted by BC-A on July 24, 2009 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply