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Very interesting thought Hummmm

posted by merkie on July 22, 2009 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

I never thought of it that way.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 21, 2009 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

interesting observation

posted by lustorlove on July 20, 2009 at 9:59 PM | link to this | reply

Quite an appropriate piece for tonight here.  There's an awful lot of leaves outside my window with raindrops clinging to them and dripping off. 

posted by TAPS. on July 20, 2009 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

How very unique to come upon this poem tonight! I have been sodding my lawn in the backyard today! Seventy five pieces were placed! I am so tired that I feel like a leaf in your poem! I am so tired I could fall on the grass and stay until morning! What a great poem, sweetie! Love you the very mostest! By the way it looks fantastic! Good-bye dirt! sammie

posted by sam444 on July 20, 2009 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

What a thought, maybe they're just scared to take the jump :)

posted by calia14 on July 20, 2009 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

> You write on the level of art with an awesome sharp perception. BillJRoost

 

posted by BC-A on July 20, 2009 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

you have a way of capturing the many forms of water so well; this is not exception! Many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on July 20, 2009 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

I love how you bring rain, storm, shadows and light into many of

the themes of your poems to make us think about other things...Great work, as usual.

posted by Ariala on July 20, 2009 at 4:48 AM | link to this | reply

yes today I could hee them in the woods reluctant to fall it was magic.

you captured my experience so beautifully.

posted by Kabu on July 19, 2009 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

Sometimes I'm afraid of the 'waiting grass' too. Thank you for sharing this with us Sinome; it's both wise and beautiful.

posted by elinjo on July 19, 2009 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply