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Sam .. I truly appreciate that you took the time to read and please know your opinion really means very much to me, thank you! 
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BrightIrish
on July 16, 2009 at 7:36 AM
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Wiley .. Your few chosen words spoke volumes to me and I thank you so very much!
posted by
BrightIrish
on July 16, 2009 at 7:32 AM
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From a reader's viewpoint; I like the imagery and the cadence! The close was very special, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 15, 2009 at 7:18 PM
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BrightIrish~I'm not a critic either, all I know is it moved me emotionally, that should tell you how good it really is
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 15, 2009 at 7:05 PM
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Taps .. I understand what you mean about critiquing the work of others because most poetry evolves from the heart and soul of the individual writer. I don't think I've ever read one of my poems aloud. I read them over quietly in my mind. Your idea is one for me to try. I really appreciate you for taking the time to read and your acknowledgement within your words. I couldn't tell you how many I've written over the years .. they are tucked or filed in many places and once in a while I surprise myself when finding one while looking for something else. 
posted by
BrightIrish
on July 15, 2009 at 11:35 AM
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I'm no good at critiquing anyone's writing except my own, but I surely did enjoy reading it. One of the things that I do if I'm really serious about a poem I've written, is read it out loud to see what it sounds like. How many of these timeless jewels from the past do you have?
posted by
TAPS.
on July 15, 2009 at 11:03 AM
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Shobana .. I want to thank you for your kindness and willingness to grant my request. Your words are a inspiration to me and I feel honored by your comment!
posted by
BrightIrish
on July 15, 2009 at 9:35 AM
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BrightIrish - this is just about one of
the best poems I have read. You really should go ahead and publish your poems. Your friend is so right. thanks so much for stopping by.
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shobana
on July 14, 2009 at 7:29 PM
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