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Such finality! Striking imagery! I saw you note at my blog; I am so tired! I inherited a ton of weeds but the front looks smashing now! lol Then I found a small snake in the back yard! I have a bunny and a rabbit that refuse to live at their own places! It is rather comical to watch the bunny and the cat play! Have a great day tomorrow Sweetie! Love you very, very much! sammie xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on July 13, 2009 at 9:49 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks for blowing that kiss.and one to you as well. And, of course, baby!!

posted by vogue on July 13, 2009 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

No one captures those feelings in such magic words like you.Miss you, miss Miami, miss my adopted country!! Blow the ocean a kiss for me, will you.

posted by vogue on July 13, 2009 at 9:00 PM | link to this | reply

Time can do some funny things to those wounds.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 13, 2009 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, you've captured how I'd feel if I was ever to lose Liz and it is
frightening...wouldn't matter how I lost her, it would likely do me in......

posted by Rumor on July 13, 2009 at 4:32 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

As Raphael said – beautiful, terrible, beautiful.  I’ll add sorrowful.  I wonder… is she really gone? 

posted by Troosha on July 13, 2009 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

This poem is absolutely excellent....
...and beautiful...terrible, but beautiful.....

Almost upsets me to read it...I feel it. And you conveyed that feeling.....

Enough words.....


posted by Raphael222 on July 13, 2009 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

Le temps est un grand maître, dit-on, le malheur est qu'il tue ses élèves. ~Berlioz

posted by TAPS. on July 12, 2009 at 11:03 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent work, Sinome!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 12, 2009 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome - such soulful beautiful feelings.

posted by shobana on July 12, 2009 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Impeccable chère Sinome

posted by WileyJohn on July 12, 2009 at 10:07 PM | link to this | reply

she might be waiting just for him at the other side of the isle......

posted by Star5_ on July 12, 2009 at 10:02 PM | link to this | reply